tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586136780480484719.post344126205350096434..comments2023-05-07T20:49:40.257+05:30Comments on kathasrijan: कविता - अशोक आंद्रेashok andreyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03418874958756221645noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586136780480484719.post-75789915199849774152009-07-06T23:15:12.006+05:302009-07-06T23:15:12.006+05:30kavita padhi achchhi lagi badhaikavita padhi achchhi lagi badhaiसुरेश यादवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16080483473983405812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586136780480484719.post-1651614729252964532009-06-18T07:02:06.274+05:302009-06-18T07:02:06.274+05:30Dear Ashok,
Right now I have gone through your mi...Dear Ashok,<br /><br />Right now I have gone through your mini poems and mini stories. The depth of your thoughs is splendid. There is a meaning and philosophy in your first mini poem. There are no appropriate words tha I have to describe it.<br /><br />Wishing you further success<br /><br />Thanks<br />Dr. Ajit Singh Tanda<br />1001,Preet Nagar,W. No. 4<br />Darapur Mandi,P.O.Tanda<br />Distt.Hoshiarpur 144204<br />tele: 01886 222646<br />Mobile;-09417052646Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586136780480484719.post-58127659542102734472009-06-18T00:09:40.767+05:302009-06-18T00:09:40.767+05:30अच्छा प्रयास है नीरव जी ने सही फ़रमाया है ....और ब...अच्छा प्रयास है नीरव जी ने सही फ़रमाया है ....और बेहतर हो सकती थी .....अगली बार उम्मीद रहेगी .....!!हरकीरत ' हीर'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09462263786489609976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586136780480484719.post-51328567346686137412009-06-15T18:39:09.888+05:302009-06-15T18:39:09.888+05:30एक अच्छी कविता के लिए बधाई ! कुछ शब्दों को अपने सह...एक अच्छी कविता के लिए बधाई ! कुछ शब्दों को अपने सही रूप में न पाकर तकलीफ होती है, इस तरफ ज़रा ध्यान दें।सुभाष नीरवhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03126575478140833321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586136780480484719.post-56713602595012876502009-06-15T07:18:50.746+05:302009-06-15T07:18:50.746+05:30Priya Ashok Ji,
जैसे रात होते ही सपने किसी तूलिक...Priya Ashok Ji,<br /><br /> जैसे रात होते ही सपने किसी तूलिका में घुस आते हैं<br />Rat , Sapane aur Tulika ka arth mujhe nahi khula. Vaise kavita acchi hai, lekina typing mistakes hain. <br /><br />Badhai.<br /><br />ChandelRoop Singh Chandelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07746336325719389687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4586136780480484719.post-59182612522708486422009-06-14T18:57:41.685+05:302009-06-14T18:57:41.685+05:30BAHUT SUNDAR BHAVABHIVYATI HAI.
MAA KE AANAND ME...BAHUT SUNDAR BHAVABHIVYATI HAI.<br /> MAA KE AANAND MEIN JAESE VISHWAS<br /> GHUS JAATA HAI JAESEE PANKTIYON<br /> MEIN MUN RAM GAYAA HAI.ASHOK JEE,<br /> ACHCHHEE KAVITA KE LIYE,AAPKO<br /> NANA BADHAAEEYAN.PRAN SHARMAnoreply@blogger.com